How's My Driving?

[prodigalmight]

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SO! Before I start I should say that I'm super glad you joined the cast at Adstring and let Andy and I enable you into doing it! However there are a few things (well okay mostly just one thing) about Bon that could use a bit of improvement. Basically, recently he's been a bit too sensitive and prone to crying. What I've seen of Bon is while he doesn't have an issue with crying exactly, he tends more to get angry and upset than teary. He seems more prone to responding loudly and physically, and rage-quitting. Lots and lots of rage-quitting.

I guess the best I can say is to lean less towards "not going to cry" for motivating his actions and more towards "I'm going to protect my morals and stand up for what I beleive in and protect people! HRRRG! >O"

Buuuuuuut this is also just my opinion. I hope you can take it into consideration, if nothing else /o/